Invitation Wording

I was going more and more invitations wording (I myself am printing), and I was wondering if people can correct it for me! It is a small wedding, so he said "intimate".

Two lives, two hearts
together in friendship
United forever in love.

Together with their parents
Brides middle first last
and
Grooms first last middle
invite you to join them for a
intimate celebration of love as they
exchange their wedding vows
Saturday, the eleventh of August
two thousand and seven
at half past ten in the morning

ceremony place
Address
City, State

Lunch Home
immediately after the ceremony


A question I have is what people think about the spacing? I think I can do that, but where do I change the spacing before the ceremony location? Such as it should go before the date instead?

Thank you! :)

It sounds good, you did a good job! I am also. I checked on the web for invitation styles and spacing. So I did mine, and how I spaced. Keep in mind that it was centered, it looked much better:) We have organized our own marriage, if parents are not at our invitation. Plus we were 50 and 52 at our wedding! Hope this helps!

Bride's name
and
Groom name

will be honored if you share
the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows

Saturday, the twenty-eighth session in January
two thousand and six
six o'clock

Reef
880 Harbor Scenic Drive South
Long Beach, California


Reception after the ceremony

I think it looks good in the state. I think people usually put the time and date before the address of the ceremony

That is, do not you think best? Nobody will look at how you!

Sounds good to me, very formal and if the style you're going for.

I think the way you have written and are appropriate intervals.

I think it is beautiful, good luck to you both.

Good.

Perfect, that is great with all the information where it should go. Congratulations

It is beautifully written and far between. it is good to put the date before the address. resembles! Congratulations

7: 30 thats gosh ...... top I would put parents wives full names

The love, but take the word intimate. It is not necessary. The location should be the last ceremony. If no reply card, then you need to RSVP which means a response is awaited. This should be the last line invitation Put RSVP 12/06/2007
and then a phone number
What I want to do is look at wedding invitations on the internet and how they are spaced. Make sure to space and the entire center. Good Luck

exchange their vows of love and marriage.

The spacing is fine. Nothing on RSVP. Any center of the formulation on paper and everything should look fine.

Congratulations.

I focus on the page, not left align. Location and time and date, then.
The wording is very good.

Here are my suggestions:
1) Place a comma after "Together with their parents,"
2) "Two Thousand Seven" (omit "and")
3) Can I take the word will be centered on the page?
Looks great otherwise. Have a good life!

Second paragraph, take the "and"

Together with the parents there, comma-up ()
Brides middle first last. (Period)
(Speaks for itself) (not and)

Middle Grooms first shall be last, comma-up () shows the determination
invites you to etc .................

Saturday ..... Ceremony Address
(Use numb.